New & Digital Essay Feedback
L4
WWW: Good, balanced answer, Ahmed, with some quotes/examples (on the first page). On the whole, fluently written.
EBI: More detail needed- missed opportunities to use keywords/theory: Rewrite introduction and add another paragraph, being more specific (dates, terminology)
Learner Response
Audiences experience of viewing media has changed immensely over the past decades through the way new and digital media has allowed this to happen. Our way of getting access to the three media platforms (e-media, broadcasting & print) and other forms of media has been revolutionized and has a huge impact on many different groups of people. This essay will be assessing how far this revolution has brought about a positive change.
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